Thursday, April 7, 2016

Comments for Devon, Randi, and Alli: Vietnam Veterans Wall

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First, write about something well done.  What did you learn from this group?  What part of the Presentation seemed the best?  Be specific.

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8 comments:

  1. The slides were standard bullet pointed style for power point presentations, however were implemented in the way bullet are supposed to be. The text on the slides was complemented by orally communicating the rest of the information.

    Eventually the slides did feel overused. This was assisted with the song that was added, but too much of a standard power point style does become bland.

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  2. I love how you guys switched from one to another ave didn't just break it up into 3 parts, I think you used great slides and info but I'd like to have seen a little more variety it all kind of looked the same.

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  3. I love how you guys switched from one to another ave didn't just break it up into 3 parts, I think you used great slides and info but I'd like to have seen a little more variety it all kind of looked the same.

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  4. Good job on going for the switch ups amongst the three of you. It was a brave choice, and you all did well keeping everything fluid. I think the slides were good, and using bullet points while speaking was a smart choice too.

    For me, the music was too loud, but it was good to set yourselves apart. Also, other photos of different memorials may have highlighted how different the monument truly is when compared to others.

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  5. I enjoyed how you guys switched back and forth between one another throughout the presentation. I thought it could have been a risky choice if one person may have spoke too much or accidentally said stuff about another's topic, but it all seemed to flow well. I also like that you guys added that song and talked about the girl in the picture. It added stuff that people weren't already aware of. The only thing I would change would be having the music already up in a different tab and at a lower volume. It would have transitioned more fluently. Otherwise, Wonderful job!

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  6. I liked that you switched back and forth between people a lot. One thing that could have been improved was that sometimes it seemed like you were reading from the slides too much, rather than speaking to the audience.

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  7. I think you guys did a great job with this. You all worked together really well, and the back and forth went really smoothly. You presentation played on emotions and that's great.

    Overall I can only say, as my constructive criticism, the song you played was way too loud. It was difficult to really focus on the words because of this.

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  8. I learned about how the construction of this monument was symbolic and represented more than just the monument itself.

    The only criticism that i have is that the music was a little to loud and distracted from your presentation.

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