Thursday, April 7, 2016

Comments for Scott: Rock and Roll HOF

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11 comments:

  1. The use of media was implemented in a different way, a good way. Having music play in the background added to the presentation and did not shift my attention away but helped drive home the feel.

    The final slide ruined the flow of the presentation, providing too much text all at once. More slides that break that part up would have done better for the presentation.

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  2. I really liked the use of having the music play in the background throughout the presentation. No one else used this technique, and I think it really helped to drive some of the facts home. It was a great and different use of media.

    I liked how the slides were all different, but maybe breaking up the last slide would help to keep the listeners engaged. It was very chunky, less words would have been nice or maybe spreading the information out throughout the whole presentation instead of one slide.

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  3. I really liked your facts in this, I had no idea that rock and roll was coined in ohio! The only criticism I can give is maybe be a little more fluid with your speech, there was a lot of er and ums

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  4. I really liked your facts in this, I had no idea that rock and roll was coined in ohio! The only criticism I can give is maybe be a little more fluid with your speech, there was a lot of er and ums

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  5. I love Rock & Roll. I was raised on the music, so it was nice hearing some information on the hall of fame. You seemed pretty enthusiastic about, which can only help a presentation. Glad to hear about Ohio's contribution to a genre I enjoy.
    I liked the idea of playing music behind you while you spoke, but the music was way too loud at first. I literally could not hear a word you said until the music had been turned down. Even then I couldn't really keep myself focused because I kept getting distracted by the people singing. Music can add an interesting flavor to a presentation, but it has to be down carefully. Also, I think the ending could have been tied closer to us as the people of Ohio rather than being simply a snapshot of the hall of fame.

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  6. I had never really known much about the Rock and Roll Hall of Fame. I thought it was surprising to see some of the names that were brought up. I thought that the music would good in bringing us closer to the Hall of Fame. I would maybe suggest not to add so many word on one slide.

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  7. I really liked your point that this place is an example of diversity in America, and how it can create something new and unique. It would have been better if the information had been spread out over more slides, so that the information could be easier to read and process.

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  8. I really liked the information you gave, especially when you listed some of the musicians and bands that were in the HOF. It was also nice to hear you connect to the topic personally.

    I think that at times the music was a bit distracting and overwhelmed your speaking, but overall it was a great idea.

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  9. I enjoyed how you played the music in the background it really set the tone, but I feel like the transition between slides and into the music was a little rough, but it didn't takeaway from your presentation. I enjoyed learning about the Rock and Roll Hall of Fame.

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  10. Overall I really enjoyed your presentation! The music in the background really set the tone and didn't overpower everything.

    The only criticism that I can give is to the fluid of your presentation, it seemed as if a few of the ideas were put together last minute and there wasnt a ton of elaboration on the details of your ideas.

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  11. I never knew that people actually rejected becoming a part of the rock and roll hall of fame. I found that erally funny.

    constructively i think that that music was kind of loud and distracting. If you turned it down a little or didn't play it at all it would have strengthened your presentation.

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